I'm a rapper...just want to no what u think of these lyrics

[OranGauvain]

yeah i rap mainly right lyrics dont really have time to rap them but yeah here is a little somthing ive ritten my rap name is G-FORCE sorry about the spellings that my down fall


progressing in life hard to picture broken down in peices like Jigsaws..//
Not a pretty picuture furturist rhymes lifes un-balenced like seasaws..//
Carnt take the pressure of life testing your body with G-F0RCE..//
people living life with no Remorse Like letting Jesus Die on the Cross..//
rich in knowlage thats my wealth.. so donald trump can call me hes fucking boss..//
really you need to picture this im a lyrical jesus but im not a spirtualist..//
intergaltical lyricist rhyme's are puting me at peace like this is bliss..//
your Diying on the in side attacking your mind like a cancer cist..//
burying u alive in a sarcophages..im on top of the mountain u carnt toppel this..//
my rhymes have more worth than fritz langs Metropolis..//
for people like me getting in music cause more conflict than religous wars..//
few emcee's surving to get into this game.... its like its fucking a holocaust.//
Give me the 5mic's and a quoteable section the the Sauce..//
I'm like Iain braidy But i only Kill Mics with no remorse..//

(hook)
Interdeimentioaly im a lyrical genius and i want you 2 remember me..//
Rhymes are complexly interlectualy Living lifes on to be Aristocrasiey's..//
people living there life played out like pussy puppet demociasey..//
Living life Faking it like living lifes as a game of monopoloy's..//
Pussy lives dont wannt better them selfs hope's relie on winning the lottorey..//


I can talk as if its an apoloclips change out my behaviour and my politcs..//
I dont give a **** about were the market is..or having a populus..//
my knowloge can build city like im called romulus..//
vision of people's life more played out than a cornationstreet omnibus..//
Chatting more shit than president bush is that how it is now.?.//
my rhymes got stripped down recylced like crackheads needing a fix now..//
a magician with words i wont miss a trick now..//
your on the Slide like wall street like the nastac or the dow.//
your wondring this guys sick like a bolimic your all wondring how..//
I got more knowlage than the Kremlin in moscow..//
Traffrican my rhymes like drugs mite aswell call me rick ross ..//
Im topeling Massive Copartions and Orgaizesion like Mircosoft..//
Hostlie take over gurillea warfair Now im you fucking boss..//
Lyricly im Jesus and you people are Judus you want to se me on a cross.//


(hook)
Interdeimentioaly im a lyrical genius and i want you 2 remember me..//
Rhymes are complexly interlectualy Living lifes on to be Aristocrasiey's..//
people living there life played out like pussy puppet demociasey..//
Living life Faking it like living lifes as a game of monopoloy's..//
Pussy lives dont wannt better them selfs hope's relie on winning the lottorey..//

[OranGauvain]

guest not liked :O

[01srainey]

haha

I just noticed this

[barrym]

Sign this guy up, keep up the good work G-Force

[01srainey]

Sign this guy up, keep up the good work G-Force

haha.

[DA77EN]

[danny275]

11 month bump?

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